tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6084696062507942783.post1157514689843806392..comments2015-09-19T03:11:26.365-07:00Comments on Grace's Blog: Writing SampleAliceMoosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08563494502668110700noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6084696062507942783.post-22635484258558526612014-09-14T22:16:44.636-07:002014-09-14T22:16:44.636-07:00Hi Grace - you can clearly see the recrafting that...Hi Grace - you can clearly see the recrafting that has gone into the beginning of your focus piece. You have carefully chosen vocabulary and sentences structures to support the image you wanted to create. Please continue this same attention to the rest of the piece to keep your reader hooked. You will need to demonstrate a variety of complex, compound and simple sentences and check for spelling, full stops and capital letters. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com