tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6084696062507942783.post2517049132710606538..comments2015-09-19T03:11:26.365-07:00Comments on Grace's Blog: Published WritingAliceMoosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08563494502668110700noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6084696062507942783.post-54317490159399344542014-03-29T21:36:25.142-07:002014-03-29T21:36:25.142-07:00Wow Grace, there are so many writing features here...Wow Grace, there are so many writing features here. I enjoyed your alliteration and metaphors. A blanket of rocks sounds pretty imposing. Thanks for sharing your experiences.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6084696062507942783.post-68843520546495976562014-03-29T01:23:36.294-07:002014-03-29T01:23:36.294-07:00You are good at using adverbs like 'suddenly&#...You are good at using adverbs like 'suddenly' and 'slowly' to build a picture for your audience. The simile you changed to a metaphor worked well. Very clever! Perhaps as a next step for publishing you might work on paragraphs.Ebony Maakahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04278822081519785920noreply@blogger.com