Big Idea:
Snow falls from the air,
the gingerbread smell,
the pine needles from the Christmas tree circling the smell around the room.
Present rappings and cards, happiness dancing around the street.
Christmas carols, bells ringing.
Family’s get together surprises smiles.
Christmas lights decorations,
Snowmen cold and the fire blazing.
Evaluation: I think I have done very well because I have created a image in
the readers mind, when I write a free verse poem again I might try and add more language features, like similes and alliteration.
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