My Improved Post

 W.A.L.T: Edit- Yesterday we watched a video about a first grade boy called Austin and he was drawing a scientific 
butterfly. His friends gave him pacific things he could work on. He worked on a few drafts but he did not just chuck the drafts in the rubbish he kept them so he could keep them and see his progress. I have Improved this post called Valintines Puzzle.

I have improved this post because I have shown a photo and put some good writing

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