Here is the link: http://www.kiwikidsnews.co.nz/
Big Idea: First we had to chose a KKN ( Kiwi Kids News ) article then we had to get a story wheel and illustrate the keywords or key ideas of this article, here is my piece of work. I choose this article
FeedBack/FeedForward: I think you did a great job because you really explained the article well in pictures it really clear what you are trying to explain I don't think you have to work on any thing.
Evaluation: I think I have done well taking away the main parts and
putting them into a short story, I think that I need to work on making my images clearer.