My writing goal this term was use a variety of simple, complex, and compound sentences
I have used a variety of simple, complex and compound sentences to build interest and suspense.
I have organised and sequenced my ideas into paragraphs for purpose and effect.
TASK: craft a free-choice piece of writing that shows how I am developing my goal
How has your writing has improved this term? Yes because Suzanne has taught me that I can't tell the reader you describe to the reader and I think I have improved that.
The part of my story I am most proud of is paragraph... I think I have made the reader build more suspense because I have used lots of words like suddenly, just then I heard.
Next time, what is a goal you can work towards? My goal for next time is to create more imaginary I will do that by using more similes and rich language.
Feedback/Feedforward: I really like the way you have made me want to read more so I knew were she was. You have some very cool similes and fit into the sentences. There were a couple of words that were mentioned a few times in some of your sentences. Like realised.