Monday 17 March 2014

Writing

W.A.L.T: Entertain (recount)
Feedback:You added lots of verbs, juicy words and Similes
Feedfoward:Add more Personifercation, and Adverbs.



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  1. Ebony Maaka17 March 2014 at 18:06

    I love how you used adverbs like suddenly and slowly. It creates suspense as I read. Well done. I wonder if some other language features could help build this. Perhaps you could add some on your next draft.

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